Don't worry too much, since it's a very good image as it is.
One of those things I wouldn't dream of trying - the pattern on the
water would lead me to an horizontal image, top of the plant one point
at left, diagonal opposite being something unknown so far, maybe part of
the surface pattern... probably nothing good, much worse than your
result. Of course this comment is being made with no knowledge of the
place, assuming I would see both the plant and the pattern on the water
surface, just to point how unique that particular photo is. It's rather
easy to suggest improvements after the image is taken and presented. :-)
Take five...
LF
Jack Davis escreveu:
Very pleased by your comments, Luiz!
It has to be one of those image that initially conflict many viewers.
Immediately..no, during the time I was shooting it, I knew how it was going to be shopped and composed.
I'm a little frustrated that I grabbed the K10 which had the 16~45 attached,
and rather than take the time to check it out, just went ahead and took the
shot. I needed more reach and found I had to pull it up to a greater extent
than I would have liked.
I've been back (10miles each way) to re-shoot it with the 50~135 and K20, but
the light hasn't been right. Has been raining for a day and a half and is
forecast to continue for a least one more.
Water flow and plant growth may not give another chance. RATS!!
Jack
--- On Sat, 5/2/09, Luiz Felipe <[email protected]> wrote:
From: Luiz Felipe <[email protected]>
Subject: Re: PESO: Cattail
To: "Pentax-Discuss Mail List" <[email protected]>
Date: Saturday, May 2, 2009, 10:50 AM
Jack, I looked at the comments before answering, so your
ideas are known by now... but here it goes anyway, and I
really didn't change much from the first impression,
before the reading.
I like the idea, and can't suggest improvements so
easily. I'm ok with the framing, the reflections and
texture in the water behind work great balancing the
vertical, a very good and interesting composition very well
executed. Very good.
LF
Jack Davis escreveu:
http://photolightimages.com/aspupload/detail.asp?ID=415
Comments?
K10, 16~45
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