I like it except for the clutter on the LH side.

IMO it might work better with a portrait orientation crop.

Cheers,

Dave

2009/5/13 frank theriault <knarftheria...@gmail.com>:
> On Tue, May 12, 2009 at 9:39 AM, Jack Davis <jdavi...@yahoo.com> wrote:
>>
>> Absent the title and due to the lighting, it appears he is just stepping off 
>> a curb. I was curious as to what could be brought out by lightening the 
>> shadows, so downloaded it and found out.
>> There is very little more available and other than the smile, really can't 
>> see anything that would support the title. I don't doubt that the title is 
>> correct it's simply that I wanted to see the action.
>> Nicely composed, Frank.
>
> Thanks, Jack.
>
> I agree that the title may not be the most appropriate, but judging by
> the relative lack of interest from the list (present company excepted,
> of course!) maybe this one isn't saying much to people.
>
> No matter.  I rather like it (austere and enigmatic though it may be),
> perhaps just because it's different from my usual stuff.  I'll work on
> another title though...

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