Thanks David.
I like it. The near silhouette works well, but there's enough detail
to catch the exuberance of his face. I would crop out enough of the
left to eliminate that messy bit of business over there. I'd probably
clone the wires off of the wall as well. They just get in the way of
the story.
Paul
On May 12, 2009, at 8:52 PM, David Savage wrote:
Shit hey.
But 'm in a good mood today I'll do the heavy lifting:
<http://knarfinthecity.blogspot.com/2009/05/warehouse-dancer.html>
DS
2009/5/13 paul stenquist <[email protected]>:
I'd like to see it, but someone clipped the URL, and I can't find the
original message.
Paul
On May 12, 2009, at 7:44 PM, David Savage wrote:
I like it except for the clutter on the LH side.
IMO it might work better with a portrait orientation crop.
Cheers,
Dave
2009/5/13 frank theriault <[email protected]>:
On Tue, May 12, 2009 at 9:39 AM, Jack Davis <[email protected]>
wrote:
Absent the title and due to the lighting, it appears he is just
stepping
off a curb. I was curious as to what could be brought out by
lightening the
shadows, so downloaded it and found out.
There is very little more available and other than the smile,
really
can't see anything that would support the title. I don't doubt
that the
title is correct it's simply that I wanted to see the action.
Nicely composed, Frank.
Thanks, Jack.
I agree that the title may not be the most appropriate, but
judging by
the relative lack of interest from the list (present company
excepted,
of course!) maybe this one isn't saying much to people.
No matter. I rather like it (austere and enigmatic though it may
be),
perhaps just because it's different from my usual stuff. I'll
work on
another title though...
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