p.s. after reading other comments...
I find the scene wonderfully telling and that's why I find it painful to
look at... the absolutely only thing
amiss is the blown out hair but I bet you could tone that down somenow
-- maybe going back to the color version and
fiddling with shadows and highlights more?
I don't find the sign and all distracting ... it draw you to the elderly
woman in the wheelchair, certainly the most unfortunate of the lot, and
the most disconnected... I love the disconnect on both ends of the
line, too - the woman tolerating a hug and
the one at the end of the line on the cell phone. Its a real short
story, this one... I don't get people thinking it is sweet at all.
ann
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But I sort of like this one. (Except for the woman's blown out white
hair.)
http://www.mapphotography.com/PAWS/pages/hug.htm
Still, and all, it was nice to be shooting again. Reminded me why I like
doing this stuff. And think I will try again next week, whether the web page
people use them or not.
Marnie aka Doe :-)
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