p.s.  after reading other comments...

I find the scene wonderfully telling and that's why I find it painful to look at... the absolutely only thing amiss is the blown out hair but I bet you could tone that down somenow -- maybe going back to the color version and
fiddling with shadows and highlights more?

I don't find the sign and all distracting ... it draw you to the elderly woman in the wheelchair, certainly the most unfortunate of the lot, and the most disconnected... I love the disconnect on both ends of the line, too - the woman tolerating a hug and the one at the end of the line on the cell phone. Its a real short story, this one... I don't get people thinking it is sweet at all.

ann

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But I sort of like this one. (Except for the woman's blown out white hair.)

http://www.mapphotography.com/PAWS/pages/hug.htm

Still, and all, it was nice to be shooting again. Reminded me why I like doing this stuff. And think I will try again next week, whether the web page people use them or not.

Marnie aka Doe  :-)




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