I have never mastered the clone tool, so that option didn't come to mind for me. Rather, I would like to see less crop! For me the only really disturbing element is the poster on the wall above his head. With a little study I was able to resolve what it was, but it was still distracting. If the crop were to include a bit more of the poster (so you could see the top of it against the wall) then it would be a fixed element in the picture rather than the beginning/ bottom end of a path of lightness leading the eye out of the frame. And/or, can you just darken that poster a smidgen?

I think this is a nice shot BTW. The harshness of the light matches the intensity of the cellist.

stan

On Mar 7, 2010, at 8:40 AM, frank theriault wrote:

I'm struggling with this one.  Took about 1/2 dozen of this young man
(the cigarette rather interested me), but the background was horrible
- not just passing pedestrians, but all sorts of junk kept getting in
the way, not matter what angle I shot from.  Harsh light wasn't my
friend either.  Even this shot (the least cluttered of the bunch) was
cropped severely to "clean things up" - at least a bit.

Does it work?  I'd prefer more environment in the shot, but given
that's not possible what are your thoughts on this one:

http://knarfinthecity.blogspot.com/2010/03/cellist-on-augusta.html

I fear it may be one for the trashcan - an "almost but not quite".

Hope you enjoy.  Comments encouraged.

cheers,
frank

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