2010/3/27 paul stenquist <[email protected]>:
> http://photo.net/photodb/photo?photo_id=10852379&size=lg
>
>
> I rarely post photos from jobs, but I kind of like the way this one worked 
> out.

I think you did a very good job and I like your lighting a lot.

Just some thoughts, not necessarily negative (disclaimer: I doubt I
could have done it that well myself so cum grano salis, por favor):

The brunette lady appears much farther back than the blonde relative
to the CEO - was this the case or is it focal length related?

Also, I'd crop a bit at the bottom to remove the jacket crease at her
elbow right at the corner where the eye exits the image.

I am divided about whether it is better or worse for the fact that the
three persons don't follow a strict geometry. Actually I think of it
more as a plus since it makes the image look more natural. All in all
I agree with Jack in that I'd be proud of this shot if it was my own
work.

Cheers
Ecke

BTW the CEO's bunny-eared skull & crossbones tie is brilliant - please
can you ask him where he bought it?

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