Sasha, it is very sharp and very nicely rendered, but to me there seems to be too much conflicting geometry. The assembly at the bottom leads the eye up and to the left, until it is stopped by the horizontal line; then the downspout leads one up and to the right. You might try cropping out the entire bottom whatever-it-is, and some of the sky to balance things.
Rick http://photo.net/photos/RickW --- On Sun, 10/10/10, Sasha Sobol <[email protected]> wrote: > From: Sasha Sobol <[email protected]> > Subject: peso - just peso > To: "Pentax-Discuss Mail List" <[email protected]> > Date: Sunday, October 10, 2010, 1:48 PM > http://www.flickr.com/photos/sobol/5066292835/lightbox > > Would love to hear your comments and critique > > --Sasha > > -- > PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List > [email protected] > http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net > to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link > directly above and follow the directions. > -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List [email protected] http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions.
