Sasha, I think Rick's comments are onto something. There is too much geometry for me. Crop off the awning piping at the bottom, or the mechanicals and sky of the top and it looks better. As is, the picture seems to have three parts, awning piping/hangers, stucco wall with sloping drain pipe, and roof mechanical structure with sky. I can't get them to mesh... Regards, Bob S.
On Sun, Oct 10, 2010 at 6:29 PM, Rick Womer <[email protected]> wrote: > Sasha, it is very sharp and very nicely rendered, but to me there seems to be > too much conflicting geometry. The assembly at the bottom leads the eye up > and to the left, until it is stopped by the horizontal line; then the > downspout leads one up and to the right. You might try cropping out the > entire bottom whatever-it-is, and some of the sky to balance things. > > Rick > > http://photo.net/photos/RickW > > > --- On Sun, 10/10/10, Sasha Sobol <[email protected]> wrote: > >> From: Sasha Sobol <[email protected]> >> Subject: peso - just peso >> To: "Pentax-Discuss Mail List" <[email protected]> >> Date: Sunday, October 10, 2010, 1:48 PM >> http://www.flickr.com/photos/sobol/5066292835/lightbox >> >> Would love to hear your comments and critique >> >> --Sasha >> >> -- >> PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List >> [email protected] >> http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net >> to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link >> directly above and follow the directions. >> > > > > > -- > PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List > [email protected] > http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net > to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow > the directions. > -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List [email protected] http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions.
