On Feb 6, 2011, at 9:21 AM, P. J. Alling wrote: > That's a great juxtaposition, but the composition is a little off. I don;t > know maybe the bird should be a little more off center, maybe a vertical > would be better. There's something really good here, you ust missed it by a > tiny bit.
I agree with P.J. I love the feeder and the bird, but feel that the composition doesn't really have a point of focus. I would crop about a quarter off of the top, and just enough off the left to put his eye right on the 1/3 x 1/3 upper left corner, that would make the bird larger, and place him at a compsitionally stronger point to draw your eye to. > > On 2/6/2011 4:07 AM, Daniel J. Matyola wrote: >> http://photo.net/photodb/photo?photo_id=12569093 >> >> Comments, Suggestions, Criticisms and Abuse are always welcome. >> > > > -- > Where's the Kaboom? There was supposed to be an Earth-shattering Kaboom! > > --Marvin the Martian. > > > -- > PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List > [email protected] > http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net > to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow > the directions. -- Larry Colen [email protected] sent from i4est -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List [email protected] http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions.
