Paul, Ken, JAck, Walt, Bruce, Jeff ...
I (now) see what you mean about the staircase... I think it is all
there in the original but the original is very dark at the bottom
and strongly tilted... I cropped the bottom because of a distracting
something.. looking at the raw file I cant make out the bottom
at the moment but I'll work on it...
(Walt - I didn't mean to compare it to the first other than it was
another shot in the station... )
Maybe I'll put a straight copy of the original on smugmug in an unlisted
area and send it you lot off list - after I do Take 3 :-)
Jack, the light and haziness of the first , and the collar with the
newspaper suit me... the sadness I dont like just comes from the
homeless people asleep at the other end of the bench. when I took the
shot, looking through the viewfinder, I didn't
see them other than people sitting the bench.. that is , I couldn't make
them out as other than forms, though I knew
they must be people. Melancholy I like :-)
stay tuned for improvements
ann
Walter Gilbert wrote:
I completely agree with Jack, here. There was a certain gauziness
about the first shot that really complemented it, people notwithstanding.
The more recent shot is lovely, though, and would definitely benefit
from being taken on its own terms rather than in comparison to the
original.
-- Walt
On 3/12/2011 7:39 AM, Jack Davis wrote:
Cleaner image than the first. Actually, the flatter somewhat hazy
first image created a possibly unintended melancholy mood.
"Take 2" includes more definition and order, but is so distractingly
"incomplete." :)
Jack
--- On Fri, 3/11/11, Ann Sanfedele<[email protected]> wrote:
From: Ann Sanfedele<[email protected]>
Subject: Peso - Hoboken station, take 2
To: "Pentax-Discuss Mail List"<[email protected]>
Date: Friday, March 11, 2011, 8:11 PM
http://annsan.smugmug.com/On-the-Road-or-On-Foot/New-York-Snaps-2011/15389206_z3saz/1/1213377210_bHGc6/Medium
I used the perspective tool to straighten the verticals of
the window frames... shot at 1600 f5.6 1/750.
Those windows are painted with gilt. I like this one
better than the first one I showed you all... not so sad.
ann
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