> From: [email protected] [mailto:[email protected]] On Behalf Of > David J Brooks
> > > Hi Dave--The file is a bit big, any chance > > you might post an excerpt to a blog or something. > > http://equishooter.posterous.com/54753681 > Only just seen this. I gotta tell you, Dave, this is not the best opening I've ever read: "I am currently trying to write a book about my 35 years in the Land Survey industry" Could you not try one of these: "It was a dark and stormy night" "Last night I dreamt I went to land survey again" "It was a land survey in April and the clocks were striking thirteen" "Land survey. Light of my life, fire of my loins" "It is a truth universally acknowledged that a single man in possession of a land survey, must be in want of a wife" "The past is a foreign country. They survey differently there" "It was the afternoon of my eighty-first survey and I was in bed with my catamite when Ali announced that the archbishop had come to see me" ? Actually, you know what? Re-reading it after reading all these, it's not so bad. Not so bad at all. B -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List [email protected] http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions.
