On Sat, May 28, 2011 at 12:27 PM, Bob W <[email protected]> wrote:
>> From: [email protected] [mailto:[email protected]] On Behalf Of
>> David J Brooks
>
>>
>> > Hi Dave--The file is a bit big, any chance
>> > you might post an excerpt to a blog or something.
>>
>> http://equishooter.posterous.com/54753681
>>
>
> Only just seen this.
>
> I gotta tell you, Dave, this is not the best opening I've ever read:
>
> "I am currently trying to write a book about my 35 years in the Land Survey
> industry"

Sorry, I panicked.

Dave
>
> Could you not try one of these:
>
> "It was a dark and stormy night"
>
> "Last night I dreamt I went to land survey again"
>
> "It was a land survey in April and the clocks were striking thirteen"
>
> "Land survey. Light of my life, fire of my loins"
>
> "It is a truth universally acknowledged that a single man in possession of a
> land survey, must be in want of a wife"
>
> "The past is a foreign country. They survey differently there"
>
> "It was the afternoon of my eighty-first survey and I was in bed with my
> catamite when Ali announced that the archbishop had come to see me"
>
> ?
>
> Actually, you know what? Re-reading it after reading all these, it's not so
> bad. Not so bad at all.
>
> B
>
>
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