Don,
Yes, more of the tree on the right.
And straighten the left edge of the house vs the frame.
Overall a nice B+W rendering of Iowa!
Regards,  Bob S.

On Tue, Jun 14, 2011 at 4:44 PM, Ken Waller <[email protected]> wrote:
>> I am not fluent in Black & White so fire away. ... Don
>
> Yeah but you certainly are conversant with B+W !
>
> I like it as is but it might be improved IMO with either more of the tree on
> the RH side or moving to the left to eliminate it entirely.
>
> Kenneth Waller
> http://www.pentaxphotogallery.com/kennethwaller
>
> ----- Original Message ----- From: "Don Guthrie" <[email protected]>
> Subject: Even Spring can be gloomy in Iowa
>
>
>> Anyone who has been to Iowa in Springtime knows it not all sunshine &
>> fresh flowers. Even the sunset was colorless this day. I am not fluent in
>> Black & White so fire away. ... Don
>>
>>
>> http://donspix.posterous.com/farmyard-in-the-gloom-of-early-spring-photo
>
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