Anne, Thanks I'm glad you liked it. For you and other color curious folks, here is a color rendering. http://flic.kr/p/9syhb1

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I like skies like that!   nicely done Bw, I think -- but I's like to see
your color original as well - just to see how much you
are exagerating on the lack of color :_)

ann





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Bob, posting here is such a valuable experience. I am worried about the B&W and I should have looked closer at the crop. Thanks for the insight.


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Don,
Yes, more of the tree on the right.
And straighten the left edge of the house vs the frame.
Overall a nice B+W rendering of Iowa!
Regards,  Bob S.

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Jack Thanks for the comment. I have a wider lens and if I can remember where I took the photo I shall revisit it.

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I think the Spring conditions were ideally suited to this scene. Only problem 
is the lack of enough frame area to include the far right tree.

Too bad! It just doesn't work for me as displayed here.
Wider lens or two separate shots along with some perspective changes.

Jack


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Mark I am so glad you made a connection to this photo. It may be among the last of its type. As Iowa was trying to ban such pictures. Eventually they moved on to the budget but they are still in session so it may be July 1st before any new law goes into effect. I may become the purveyor of farm porn.

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That's nice - I really like the feel to this image.

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Brian Thanks for the nice words. I will scout up the original and see if there is anything left t work with. But you know the sky is full of white puffy clouds today and if I can remember where this farm was....



Anyone who has been to Iowa in Springtime knows it not all sunshine &
> fresh flowers. Even the sunset was colorless this day. I am not fluent
> in Black & White so fire away. ... Don
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> http://donspix.posterous.com/farmyard-in-the-gloom-of-early-spring-photo


Nothing at all wrong with the rendering - well done.

Like others, I think the composition is let down a bit by the right hand
side.  If it were mine I'd crop it at the left hand edge of the barn on
the right and maybe take a bit off the bottom.

There's lots of photo opportunities in that location.  Well worth
another trip back in any weather!



Cheers

Brian

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Western Sydney Australia
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Christine glad you liked it. considering all the times I snap the shutter and 98% are trash, I can only hope for uncontentious competence at best.


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lovely bw rendering, Don.  I think you're more fluent than you realize.
Cheers, Christine



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And why did I push a photo on the same day as Mark Roberts. I showed Marks pictures to my biggest fan (my wife) after she heard me gushing and she said "Oh they can't be that much better than yours" followed by "OH! Wow! WOW OOOH!" When I said she was killing me here she went through them a second time and finally found one ONE! she said she might have left out.








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