Don, to asses the balance of the sky, I reduced the image so as of to be able to view it full length. Looks comfortable to me as is. I, also, like the density and shape of the black sky.
Jack ----- Original Message ----- From: Don Guthrie <[email protected]> To: [email protected] Cc: Sent: Friday, September 9, 2011 9:12 AM Subject: Re: Black Snake On Bldg. #1 Thanks for the tip Ken. I looked at the photo again & cropping the top seemed to change the perspective slightly but made for a tighter composition I suppose. Taken under advisement before I make a print. > Subject: Re: Black Snake On Bldg. #1 > Message-ID: <009e01cc6e4c$855ce7d0$de2ae504@kena60ebc3b689> > Content-Type: text/plain; format=flowed; charset="iso-8859-1"; > reply-type=response > > Well seen & captured but I'd eliminate about half of the blank sky above the > building. > > Kenneth Waller > http://www.pentaxphotogallery.com/kennethwaller ---------------------------------------------------- Jack, Thanks for looking and your kind comments > From: Jack Davis <[email protected]> > To: Pentax-Discuss Mail List <[email protected]> > Subject: Re: Black Snake On Bldg. #1 > Message-ID: > <[email protected]> > Content-Type: text/plain; charset=iso-8859-1 > > Exceedingly well done, Don.? DOF and lighting, superb! > > Jack > ----------------------------------------------------- Darren I'm glad to be back at the computer and I am gathering strength for the Fall shooting season. Thanks for looking. > From: Darren Addy <[email protected]> > To: Pentax-Discuss Mail List <[email protected]> > Subject: Re: Black Snake On Bldg. #1 > Message-ID: > <CAEQABGRBNZQw9fm29LHBnH7dYM456J=l41+zdaat0xcbh-f...@mail.gmail.com> > Content-Type: text/plain; charset=ISO-8859-1 > > Glad to have you back, Don. > I like it a lot. ________________________________________________ Bruce I am recovered but still working on my stamina. I too noticed the halo when I looked at the Posterous version but it was less obvious in Aperture where I processed it. Something to watch for in the future. Thanks for the constructive comments. > From: Bruce Walker <[email protected]> > To: Pentax-Discuss Mail List <[email protected]> > Subject: Re: Black Snake On Bldg. #1 > Message-ID: <[email protected]> > Content-Type: text/plain; charset=ISO-8859-1; format=flowed > > On 11-09-08 11:39 AM, Don Guthrie wrote: >> After being absent from the list for the summer (due to illness) I >> have been catching up w/o participating. > Sorry to hear that. I hope you're well recovered. > > >> Herewith is my 1st offering for C&C. >> >> http://donspix.posterous.com/black-snake-on-building-one > Nice. I like the PoV and composition, Don. I think, though, that the > local contrast boosting is a little too obvious (visible as a dark halo > around the building edges, against the sky). > > -bmw -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List [email protected] http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions. -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List [email protected] http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions.
