I really like this photo for the CD cover too.

On the text, I'm not a graphics design authority but one issue bothers me: the text is collectively neither right-aligned nor left-aligned, nor centered. "Vibrations" and "Paul Miles" are right-aligned with each other, but "Healing" floats above in a visually random position. The simplest fix I think would be to slide Healing over to right-align it too. I have no problem with where you positioned it. I do think it may end up too small to easily read on a CD cover.

The other quibble that maybe bugs Darren is the face you used. It looks a lot like a clone of Comic Sans Bold, which is one of the most reviled typefaces in history.

http://www.thedesigncubicle.com/2008/12/why-exactly-designers-hate-comic-sans/

But honestly, I think it works here since you are setting a friendly, informal tone, which I assume mirrors the music inside.

-bmw


On 11-09-14 4:55 PM, Paul Stenquist wrote:
Thanks Darren.
Where would you have placed the type? I purposely left room for it in the 
grass, where there is minimal detail. It also balances the bright flowers in 
the other corner, IMO.

Paul


On Sep 14, 2011, at 2:26 PM, Darren Addy wrote:

Nice photo! (However, whoever chose the font and lettering
placement/alignment should be taken out and shot... and I don't mean
with a camera.)

Darren Addy
Kearney, Nebraska

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