I like this a lot but that dark face in the foreground is distracting to me. It may very that the couple in the doorway are the main subjects but if I could see more of his face I'd spend less time on him and get to the couple faster. Just a bit of a dodge would be helpful imho.
Very well composed. Quite intriguing. Would love (despite the colourful graffiti) to see a bw rendering. Cheers, frank -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List [email protected] http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions.

