I like this a lot but that dark face in the foreground is distracting to me. It 
may very that the couple in the doorway are the main subjects but if I could 
see more of his face I'd spend less time on him and get to the couple faster. 
Just a bit of a dodge would be helpful imho.

Very well composed. Quite intriguing. Would love (despite the colourful 
graffiti) to see a bw rendering.

Cheers,
frank
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