YES! Variation I sooo works for me! It's much, much better now, IMHO.
Excellent shot! The man on the left really adds to the photo. Without him it's a good photo, but he adds tension which really makes things more dynamic. cheers, frank On Sun, Jan 1, 2012 at 7:02 PM, Rick Womer <[email protected]> wrote: > I've played with this image after Frank's, Larry's, and Brian's helpful > comments. > > First, the figure on the left with his face brightened by 2 stops, which I > think is an improvement: > > http://photo.net/photodb/photo?photo_id=14908112 > > Second, everything extraneous cropped out. Less context, but I like it: > > http://photo.net/photodb/photo?photo_id=14908113 > > Happy New Year! > > Rick > > > http://photo.net/photos/RickW > > > ----- Original Message ----- > From: Brian Walters <[email protected]> > To: Pentax-Discuss Mail List <[email protected]> > Cc: > Sent: Saturday, December 31, 2011 9:28 PM > Subject: Re: PESO - Face Time > > On Sat, Dec 31, 2011, at 07:20 AM, Rick Womer wrote: >> In Padua's univerisity neighborhood: >> >> >> http://photo.net/photodb/photo?photo_id=14891679 >> >> Comments appreciated! > > > I think this would have been a wonderful image if it weren't for the > figure on the left. It detracts from the main points of interest - the > two background figures, the graffiti and the bike shadow. If it were > mine, I'd be tempted to crop it vertically near the left hand edge of > the graffiti and then clone out what remains of the left hand figure. > > > > Cheers > > Brian > > ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ > Brian Walters > Western Sydney Australia > http://lyons-ryan.org/southernlight/ > -- > > > -- > http://www.fastmail.fm - mmm... Fastmail... > > > -- > PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List > [email protected] > http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net > to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow > the directions. > > > -- > PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List > [email protected] > http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net > to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow > the directions. -- "Sharpness is a bourgeois concept." -Henri Cartier-Bresson -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List [email protected] http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions.
