#1: lighting's good, perhaps a little too even? Subject looks a little tense though; did you take many shots? Bit of retouch, fade those hotspots, and you're good to go, I'd say.
#2 is way too soft for me. It'd be okay if reduced for use as a thumbnail, otherwise I'd skip it. Good stuff, Collin. On Mon, Feb 6, 2012 at 9:48 AM, Collin Brendemuehl <[email protected]> wrote: > This gal got a promotion, so I took her pic for the industry journal. > Some bright spots, but not too much. > She & I agreed that #2 was prettier, but #1 was more professional. > > #1 http://www.brendemuehl.net/images/margarita.jpg > #2 http://www.brendemuehl.net/images/margarita2.jpg > > K-r with Super Takumar 105/2.8. > ISO 200, f/5.6. > > Sincerely, > > Collin Brendemuehl > "He is no fool who gives what he cannot keep to gain what he cannot lose" > -- Jim Elliott -- -bmw -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List [email protected] http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions.
