From: Larry Colen
On Feb 23, 2012, at 10:58 AM, John Sessoms wrote:
"ZA Y ART" would be the best, were it framed a little better.
Do tell? How would I improve the framing?
Based on memory, since the link now produces a "No photos here..."
message, and it "Couldn't find a user matching username 'ellarsee'" - I
think much of the black space above and to the right is superfluous.
White space, or in this case black space, can be an important element,
but it should bring the eye to the other elements. Here it doesn't.
So, get rid of everything that doesn't draw your eye into the main
element of the image.
BTW, looking at the images in larger size, which I managed to figure out
how to do after posting the previous, I think you may have found one
hippie there - that older guy sitting by himself on the bench, playing
guitar; almost hidden behind the rice rocket.
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