I saw it on Flickr and didn't notice you message here. My bad. I do like the shot, but the lighting doesn't quite work for me. I think it needed more light on the model.
As it is the bright background light is overpowering/brighter than the main light on the model. Cheers, Dave On 7 March 2012 22:12, Bruce Walker <[email protected]> wrote: > Curious: not one comment. Too offensive for the PDML? Should I have > marked it NSFW? > > On Sat, Mar 3, 2012 at 10:03 PM, Bruce Walker <[email protected]> wrote: >> I'm exhausted. I was the Artistic Director and a photog for an all-day >> photoshoot. The theme was Vintage Pinup and my goal was to produce shots in >> the style of 40's and 50's pinups, especially Gil Elvgren. I produced a >> shoot theme document, put it up in Google Docs and everybody participated >> with scenario ideas, and dug around for wardrobe and props. >> >> Here's one shot from 709. This is essentially straight out of camera; it >> still needs some Ps work to deal with things like the fuzz from the shag rug >> that is snagged in the stiletto heels. >> >> http://www.flickr.com/photos/bruce_m_walker/6804689830/in/photostream/lightbox/ >> >> or if Flickr lightbox gives you indigestion, >> >> http://flic.kr/p/bniPds >> >> K20D, DA* 50-135/2.8 @ 58mm/f:11, 125th, ISO 100. >> Four Bowens 400 WS strobes, beauty dish on model, rest for bkgnd and fill. >> Cranky radio trigger thingy. >> >> Enjoy! > > -- > -bmw > > -- > PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List > [email protected] > http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net > to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow > the directions. -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List [email protected] http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions.

