A few minor issues I see...

- Your cover photo is of a happy sailor, but the only gallery you show is 
Katrina. Is this the "cover photo" for the Katrina gallery? In general, I think 
you need to be careful about the associations implied by the physical 
relationship between elements on your page. 
- I do not like the site name. Unless all of the included photos now and 
forever more will be TX400, and/or your intended audience is a bunch of old 
guys with nostalgic memories of the days when men were men, boys were boys, and 
real photographers shot low light B&W, I think the name is somewhere between a 
misrepresentation and a bunch of random characters with no meaning to the 
majority of the audience.
- Others have already pointed out the need for a gallery index. I click on the 
Katrina link, I see an image, and then I close the page and the site. If you do 
not add an index, make sure your best image is the first one because that is 
likely t be the only one anyone looks at.

stan

On May 24, 2012, at 9:53 PM, Jeffery Smith wrote:

> After a hiatus of about 6 years, I'm rebuilding a minimalist website from the 
> ground up. I decided to make it easy to view...on an iPad. 
> 
> Can some of you take a look and let me know what you think of the format? I'm 
> not a pro, so there is nothing promotional on it. And the only gallery I have 
> up so far is about 80 photos from the Lower 9th Ward taken after Katrina. All 
> taken with Tri-X film with a rangefinder, so it is totally OT.
> 
> The site is www.400tx.com. 
> 
> Thanks much, in advance.
> 
> Jeffery
> 
> Sent from my iPad
> 
> Jeffery L. Smith
> New Orleans, Louisiana
> USA
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