on 2012-07-27 17:23 Igor Roshchin wrote
I cannot decide between these two fun shots:
http://42graphy.org/misc/_IR38340.jpg or
http://42graphy.org/misc/_IR38340-2.jpg
... I didn't mean which of the two women, but rather which of
the two crops?
I'd appreciate your input especially if you can also provide
a comment "why" that one?
for me, the loose crop is too loose, the tight crop too tight; my suggestion,
starting with the wide version, is to crop the left so that both red squiggles
around the wide white squiggle on the shoulder descend to the bottom of t the
frame, and on the right between the R and the o in your name
why? first i feel too close to them in the tight crop; the bare shoulder seems
to ground the composition; the balance in both is too equal, so putting the
farther person slightly closer to the center and the close person closer to the
edge creates movement; and i like seeing the edge of the green shirt go to the
bottom
if this is to be displayed much smaller, then a tighter crop might be better
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