Hi Boris, the second one is the stronger of the 2. Both nicely composed and exposed, but the second has a less cliched subject matter. The second one feels slightly hemmed in by the frame, as if you've struggled a bit to squeeze it in. I like the idea of the triangular composition, but it feels a bit strained. Perhaps if you'd done without the lounger (?) on the right, and given the gazebo a bit more breathing space it could have conveyed what I think you were after (the light, the moon, the clouds etc.) slightly better. Still a jolly good shot though.
B > -----Original Message----- > From: PDML [mailto:[email protected]] On Behalf Of Boris Liberman > Sent: 16 December 2012 04:46 > To: Pentax-Discuss Mail List > Subject: Two low light PESOs > > Hi! > > #54 - > http://pentax-ways.blogspot.com/2012/11/peso-2012-54-flow-of-light.html > > Tech stuff: Ricoh GXR, 50mm module > > > > #57 - http://pentax-ways.blogspot.com/2012/12/peso-2012-57-night.html > > Text stuff: K-5, DA* 16-50/2.8 > > > Please be brutal and honest. > > Boris > > -- > PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List > [email protected] > http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net > to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and > follow the directions. -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List [email protected] http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions.
