On Dec 21, 2012, at 12:32 AM, Christine Aguila <[email protected]> wrote:
> I completely agree with Bob's comments. Cheers, Christine > > > On Dec 16, 2012, at 4:18 AM, Bob W <[email protected]> wrote: > >> Hi Boris, >> >> the second one is the stronger of the 2. Both nicely composed and exposed, >> but the second has a less cliched subject matter. The second one feels >> slightly hemmed in by the frame, as if you've struggled a bit to squeeze it >> in. I like the idea of the triangular composition, but it feels a bit >> strained. Perhaps if you'd done without the lounger (?) on the right, and >> given the gazebo a bit more breathing space it could have conveyed what I >> think you were after (the light, the moon, the clouds etc.) slightly better. >> Still a jolly good shot though. >> >> B >> >>> -----Original Message----- >>> From: PDML [mailto:[email protected]] On Behalf Of Boris Liberman >>> Sent: 16 December 2012 04:46 >>> To: Pentax-Discuss Mail List >>> Subject: Two low light PESOs >>> >>> Hi! >>> >>> #54 - >>> http://pentax-ways.blogspot.com/2012/11/peso-2012-54-flow-of-light.html >>> >>> Tech stuff: Ricoh GXR, 50mm module >>> >>> >>> >>> #57 - http://pentax-ways.blogspot.com/2012/12/peso-2012-57-night.html >>> >>> Text stuff: K-5, DA* 16-50/2.8 >>> >>> >>> Please be brutal and honest. >>> >>> Boris >>> >>> -- >>> PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List >>> [email protected] >>> http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net >>> to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and >>> follow the directions. >> >> >> -- >> PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List >> [email protected] >> http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net >> to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and >> follow the directions. >> > -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List [email protected] http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions.
