Haven't seen ver. 1 yet but I really like this one. Cheers, frank
[email protected] wrote: >Thanks, Rick. > >As per suggestions (and thought both Ann and Jack made good pts too >about >light grapes drawing eye to light left corner), I darkened the left >corner >(but no blur) and burned down the grapes a little. I like a little >light in >that area for center of interest. > >Better? > >http://mapphotography.com/PAWS/pages/wineII.html > >---------------------------------------------------------------------------- >------ > >Really like this Marnie! Forgive me, but I'm one of those weak picky >types >who couldn't resist giving that lower left sun struck bit of vine a >couple >of clicks with the burn tool. Just keeps pulling my eye to it. > >Jack > > > >Really like this Marnie! Forgive me, but I'm one of those weak picky >types >who couldn't resist giving that lower left sun struck bit of vine a >couple >of clicks with the burn tool. Just keeps pulling my eye to it. > >Jack > >I like it--lighting and colors are very nice, and the composition is >very >effective. > >Cheers, > >Rick > > >In a message dated 9/1/2013 10:43:22 A.M. Pacific Daylight Time, >[email protected] writes: >What the boys said :-) > >maybe clone out the fence line and darken the branch a bit? might be >more noticeable because of the light on the grapes that draw your eye >over to that corner. > >ann > > > >On 9/1/2013 12:16, Godfrey DiGiorgi wrote: >> That's very nice, Marnie. >> >> As Dan said, the lower left is a little distracting although it >doesn't >ruin the photo. It would be interesting to suppress it a touch by >gently >blurring and darkening it. >> >> G >> >> On Sep 1, 2013, at 9:10 AM, Daniel J. Matyola <[email protected]> > >wrote: >> >>> I like it very much, especially the placement of the bunch of >grapes >>> in the frame and the big leaf in the lower right. >>> >>> The bright straight line and light branch to the lower left of the >>> grapes are a bit distracting, but do not ruin the image. >>> >>> Dan Matyola >>> http://www.pentaxphotogallery.com/danieljmatyola >>> >>> >>> On Sun, Sep 1, 2013 at 12:06 PM, <[email protected]> wrote: >>>> Friend and I did a little photo trip fairly recently. Took him to >a >tiny >>>> local vineyard (one field, one hill) that I've shot before. >Mainly >when it >>>> is filled with mustard. Too late for that this year. >>>> >>>> But when we arrived, I discovered lots and lots of grapes on the > >vines. >>>> Never really seen that before. >>>> >>>> Nothing great, just liked the fruity abundance of it... >>>> >>>> http://mapphotography.com/PAWS/pages/wine.html >> >> > >-- >PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List >[email protected] >http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net >to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and > >follow the directions. “Analysis kills spontaneity.” -- Henri-Frederic Amiel -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List [email protected] http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions.
