The difference is small, but I think that it is a definite improvement. Dan Matyola http://www.pentaxphotogallery.com/danieljmatyola
On Sun, Sep 1, 2013 at 3:10 PM, <[email protected]> wrote: > Thanks, Rick. > > As per suggestions (and thought both Ann and Jack made good pts too about > light grapes drawing eye to light left corner), I darkened the left corner > (but no blur) and burned down the grapes a little. I like a little light in > that area for center of interest. > > Better? > > http://mapphotography.com/PAWS/pages/wineII.html > > ---------------------------------------------------------------------------- > ------ > > Really like this Marnie! Forgive me, but I'm one of those weak picky types > who couldn't resist giving that lower left sun struck bit of vine a couple > of clicks with the burn tool. Just keeps pulling my eye to it. > > Jack > > > > Really like this Marnie! Forgive me, but I'm one of those weak picky types > who couldn't resist giving that lower left sun struck bit of vine a couple > of clicks with the burn tool. Just keeps pulling my eye to it. > > Jack > > I like it--lighting and colors are very nice, and the composition is very > effective. > > Cheers, > > Rick > > > In a message dated 9/1/2013 10:43:22 A.M. Pacific Daylight Time, > [email protected] writes: > What the boys said :-) > > maybe clone out the fence line and darken the branch a bit? might be > more noticeable because of the light on the grapes that draw your eye > over to that corner. > > ann > > > > On 9/1/2013 12:16, Godfrey DiGiorgi wrote: >> That's very nice, Marnie. >> >> As Dan said, the lower left is a little distracting although it doesn't > ruin the photo. It would be interesting to suppress it a touch by gently > blurring and darkening it. >> >> G >> >> On Sep 1, 2013, at 9:10 AM, Daniel J. Matyola <[email protected]> > wrote: >> >>> I like it very much, especially the placement of the bunch of grapes >>> in the frame and the big leaf in the lower right. >>> >>> The bright straight line and light branch to the lower left of the >>> grapes are a bit distracting, but do not ruin the image. >>> >>> Dan Matyola >>> http://www.pentaxphotogallery.com/danieljmatyola >>> >>> >>> On Sun, Sep 1, 2013 at 12:06 PM, <[email protected]> wrote: >>>> Friend and I did a little photo trip fairly recently. Took him to a > tiny >>>> local vineyard (one field, one hill) that I've shot before. Mainly > when it >>>> is filled with mustard. Too late for that this year. >>>> >>>> But when we arrived, I discovered lots and lots of grapes on the > vines. >>>> Never really seen that before. >>>> >>>> Nothing great, just liked the fruity abundance of it... >>>> >>>> http://mapphotography.com/PAWS/pages/wine.html >> >> > > -- > PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List > [email protected] > http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net > to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and > follow the directions. > > > -- > PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List > [email protected] > http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net > to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow > the directions. -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List [email protected] http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions.
