That's better. You've also got the subject off-centre in that one.
Miles better. Really nice actually.

Chris

On 15 September 2013 23:00, Rick Womer <[email protected]> wrote:
> Hmmm...
>
> I see what you mean about the bench, Chris.  I've tried various crops on this 
> pic, and they lose the feeling of solitude I was trying to convey.
>
> So, here is a different shot from the same series; tell me what you think.
>
> http://photo.net/photodb/photo?photo_id=17528412&size=lg
>
> or
>
> http://gallery.photo.net/photo/17528412-lg.jpg
>
> Cheers,
>
> Rick
>
>
>
> http://photo.net/photos/RickW
>
>
> ----- Original Message -----
> From: Chris Mitchell <[email protected]>
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> Sent: Sunday, September 15, 2013 5:37 PM
> Subject: Re: PESO - Morning Study
>
> Nice feel to it Rick - almost seems to have the texture of a painting.
> The seat in the RH corner is a little distracting and maybe a crop
> might improve things - although you'd lose the tree as well which
> would be a shame. Perhaps a letterbox crop taking out the bottom
> section would do it?
>
> Chris
>
> On 15 September 2013 22:09, Rick Womer <[email protected]> wrote:
>> Early one morning, in a small park on the Penn medical campus:
>>
>> http://photo.net/photodb/photo?photo_id=17524181&size=lg
>>
>> or
>>
>> http://gallery.photo.net/photo/17524181-lg.jpg
>>
>> (K-5, FA 28/2.8)
>>
>> Comments?
>>
>> Rick
>>
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