I agree with Chris on the quality & mood of the shot. Was the one with the umbrellas and the lady sitting by herself yours? It looks like a theme here. I do not mind the lower corner but if you cropped out the building from the top it would add much to the isolation feeling IMHO.

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Date: Sun, 15 Sep 2013 22:37:21 +0100
From: Chris Mitchell<[email protected]>
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Subject: Re: PESO - Morning Study
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Nice feel to it Rick - almost seems to have the texture of a painting.
The seat in the RH corner is a little distracting and maybe a crop
might improve things - although you'd lose the tree as well which
would be a shame. Perhaps a letterbox crop taking out the bottom
section would do it?

Chris

On 15 September 2013 22:09, Rick Womer<[email protected]>  wrote:
>Early one morning, in a small park on the Penn medical campus:
>
>http://photo.net/photodb/photo?photo_id=17524181&size=lg
>
>or
>
>http://gallery.photo.net/photo/17524181-lg.jpg
>
>(K-5, FA 28/2.8)
>
>Comments?
>
>Rick


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