The third try seems more realistic to me.

Kenneth Waller
http://www.pentaxphotogallery.com/kennethwaller

----- Original Message ----- From: "Ciprian Dorin Craciun" <[email protected]>
Subject: Re: PESO: Autumn-scapes :)


On Thu, Oct 17, 2013 at 11:15 PM, Ciprian Dorin Craciun
<[email protected]> wrote:
On Thu, Oct 17, 2013 at 10:12 PM,  <[email protected]> wrote:

I have a couple of comments that should improve this image -

Comments are always welcomed, especially those critical, thus let's see...


I'd crop out the blank sky as it doesn't add anything to the image.

    The initial image is an APS-C format (3:2 aspect ratio), which
I've already cropped to a 2:1 aspect ration while keeping the full
width.  Thus I was quite afraid of cutting even more of the sky.


And
while I wasn't there the red cast, especially in the sky doesn't seem real
in this case.

    The more plausible cause could be that I've dialed `0.9` for the
tint value in white-balance, thus towards red.  I've done that because
the neutral value seemed to "greenish" to me.

    I'll try both suggestions and see what I get out.


   OK, I've tried to correct some of the mentioned flaws (i.e. remove
the red cast, crop the sky tighter) and the result is:


http://data.volution.ro/ciprian/bdf753de58c560bc/27a43bb4cc3bcb9c/variant-b--x800.jpg


   I've also tried to enhance the saturation in a third try:


http://data.volution.ro/ciprian/bdf753de58c560bc/27a43bb4cc3bcb9c/variant-c--x800.jpg


   And the larger variants (~3.5 MiB) are:


http://data.volution.ro/ciprian/bdf753de58c560bc/27a43bb4cc3bcb9c/variant-b--x1080.jpg


http://data.volution.ro/ciprian/bdf753de58c560bc/27a43bb4cc3bcb9c/variant-c--x1080.jpg


   Ciprian.


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