this is better - the tree on the right and the darker sky both help
upping the contrast would help - some cropping so that the tree isnt
quite so far to the right (that is, chop off from the left and, while
you are at it a bit off the bottom.)
I didn't see the need to comment on the other as I would have jsut been
repeating Ken and others comments.
ann
On 10/18/2013 00:33, Ciprian Dorin Craciun wrote:
On Thu, Oct 17, 2013 at 11:15 PM, Ciprian Dorin Craciun
<[email protected]> wrote:
On Thu, Oct 17, 2013 at 10:12 PM, <[email protected]> wrote:
Other than the colors, I'm not sure what I should be looking at - ie I
don't see any compositional elements - line, shape, form etc
Unfortunately I agree about the lack of composition in my picture.
It's more a snapshot of the autumn colors while on the road, made
from the single vantage point I've had access to (although this
doesn't make a good excuse).
(In fact since I've got the K-30 this spring I've been
photographing mostly city-scapes and mid-day landscapes, thus the
first change I got to catch something more colorful I was itching to
put it out.)
Let's see if the other snapshot taken from the same vantage point
is better from a composition point of view.
http://data.volution.ro/ciprian/bdf753de58c560bc/44ff10a8138027c8/variant-a--x800.jpg
And the larger variant (~3.5 MiB)
http://data.volution.ro/ciprian/bdf753de58c560bc/44ff10a8138027c8/variant-a--x1080.jpg
Ciprian.
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