Would it work better without the caption? -- say, "Untitled". This was just a spontaneous pose that the model held for a moment. I realize that by adding my caption I'm interpreting some aspect of the scene, and in turn likely influencing the viewer to some extent.
Thanks for considering it, Frank. Very interesting to hear differing views on this subject matter. Facial expressions are complex and showing _real_ emotion is not trivial. On Tue, Jun 10, 2014 at 11:41 PM, knarf <[email protected]> wrote: > Hmmm... > > I really want to like it but there's something not quite working for me. I > think I know what Bill means. > > It feels forced, not natural. > > Of course technically it's flawless. > > Cheers, > frank > > On 10 June, 2014 1:33:43 PM EDT, Bruce Walker <[email protected]> wrote: >>http://off-axis.brucemwalker.com/image/88382325347 >> >>Comments invited. > > “Analysis kills spontaneity.” -- Henri-Frederic Amiel > > > > -- > PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List > [email protected] > http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net > to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow > the directions. -- -bmw -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List [email protected] http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions.

