The waving-near-her-ear could have been because I was having her avoid
putting too much weight on her arms ("just touch; don't lean"), or
just bad timing of the shot on my part too.Thank you, Paul. On Wed, Jun 11, 2014 at 11:19 AM, Paul Stenquist <[email protected]> wrote: > The lighting is excellent as usual. I think the problem here is that the pose > is unnatural. It looks uncomfortable. Her right hand isn’t contacting her > head — it’s kind of waving at her ear -- and she’s leaning to the right at a > strange angle The idea is good: a shot in repose. But you have to get her to > land in a natural position that’s still attractive. Not easy. > > Paul > On Jun 11, 2014, at 10:34 AM, Bruce Walker <[email protected]> wrote: > >> On Wed, Jun 11, 2014 at 10:22 AM, Bill <[email protected]> wrote: >>> On 11/06/2014 8:20 AM, Bruce Walker wrote: >>>> >>>> Do you mean in the way Frank suggests? >>>> >>>> Thanks for the look and comment, Bill. >>>> >>> >>> Yeah, it just looks really forced and contrived. Technically it is flawless >>> though. >> >> Thanks, Bill. Did you see my comment to Frank? Can I put the blame on >> my attempt to caption it -- I have no idea what was actually going >> through the model's head at that moment. >> >> The good news for me is that am free to concentrate 100% on connecting >> with the model, if you guys all feel the lighting is okay. :-) That >> will be my next plateau. >> >> -- >> -bmw >> >> -- >> PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List >> [email protected] >> http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net >> to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and >> follow the directions. > > > -- > PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List > [email protected] > http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net > to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow > the directions. -- -bmw -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List [email protected] http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions.
