Hi Larry,

The picture on the face is interesting, but I don't think the strawberry
fits into that picture.
I don't know why: either the color gamma is wrong, the texture is
different (smooth face vs. textured stawberry), the size is small, or
something else.

Of all photos with strawberries, the better one is probably LRC30829. 
But there are two things that could be improved:
1. She should have a strong, definitive hold of that strawberry: holding
the strawberry itself, not the "green tail".
(the same applies to all photos)
2. Something is missing in the face expression.

I think these are the best photos in this series:
LRC30749
LRC30720

These could've been a nice shot showing the full picture, but the
face expression is subpar on it: LRC30873.
This face expression is much better: LRC30745, but there other problems
here.

HTH,

Igor


Larry Colen Mon, 28 Jul 2014 15:59:30 -0700 wrote:

A friend of mine does face painting and wanted to do a photo shoot with me to 
show off her work.  She got a mutual friend to be a model (you may recognize 
the the model from previous photos of mine).  The whole evening was very 
experimental and educational.  I felt like I was spending more effort fighting 
the lights and our limited time to shoot than I was just getting photos.


Here's a photo  that despite it's problems, is still kind  of nice.  The fill 
flash and the hair light didn't trigger, but the resulting effect seems to have 
worked.

https://www.flickr.com/photos/ellarsee/14578333810/in/set-72157645988395145

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