Wow!... such a delay in the echo!
Ping!...
;-)
Igor
Larry Colen lrc at red4est.com
Mon Sep 8 16:05:38 EDT 2014
Thanks a lot for the feedback.
Igor Roshchin wrote:
Hi Larry,
The picture on the face is interesting, but I don't think the strawberry
fits into that picture.
I don't know why: either the color gamma is wrong, the texture is
different (smooth face vs. textured stawberry), the size is small, or
something else.
Of all photos with strawberries, the better one is probably LRC30829.
But there are two things that could be improved:
1. She should have a strong, definitive hold of that strawberry: holding
the strawberry itself, not the "green tail".
(the same applies to all photos)
2. Something is missing in the face expression.
I think these are the best photos in this series:
LRC30749
LRC30720
These could've been a nice shot showing the full picture, but the
face expression is subpar on it: LRC30873.
This face expression is much better: LRC30745, but there other problems
here.
HTH,
Igor
Larry Colen Mon, 28 Jul 2014 15:59:30 -0700 wrote:
A friend of mine does face painting and wanted to do a photo shoot with
me to
show off her work. She got a mutual friend to be a model (you may
recognize
the the model from previous photos of mine). The whole evening was very
experimental and educational. I felt like I was spending more effort
fighting
the lights and our limited time to shoot than I was just getting photos.
Here's a photo that despite it's problems, is still kind of nice. The
fill
flash and the hair light didn't trigger, but the resulting effect seems
to have
worked.
https://www.flickr.com/photos/ellarsee/14578333810/in/set-72157645988395145
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