Really nice lines here, Peter. Suggestions: I'd try leaning the stalk to the right a few degrees and removing the wild oat shaft..or whatever that wispy thing is. Also, would remove the leaf tip in the lower left corner. Then perhaps a conservative crop of the right side. I understand if you like the near silhouette butterfly, but I'd have to lighten it and take a look for myself.
Jack ----- Original Message ----- From: "P.J. Alling" <[email protected]> To: "Pentax-Discuss Mail List" <[email protected]> Sent: Thursday, February 19, 2015 6:48:33 AM Subject: PESO -- Let's do lunch. Another inch of snow last night, I'm officially tired of winter. So here's a shot from last Fall's Monarch migration. I missed focus by a bit, not that big a bit but. There was one in this sequence with the butterfly in perfect focus, and in a slightly better pose, but also partially hidden by the plant, there was a bit of wind blowing the subject around that day IIRC. https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/1604247/PESO/PESO%20---%20%20letsdolunch.html Equipment: Pentax K-5II w/vmc Vivitar Series 1 70-210mm f2.8~4.0 (Komine). As usual comments are welcome but may be totally ignored. -- I don't want to achieve immortality through my work; I want to achieve immortality through not dying. -- Woody Allen -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List [email protected] http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions. -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List [email protected] http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions.
