The closeness of the window ledge to the bottom edge of the image and the inclusion of the strip (of wood ?) next to the menu on the LH side. Minor points but gives the feel of a snap as opposed to a crafted, thought out image.
-----Original Message----- >From: Boris Liberman <[email protected]> >Subject: Re: Boris PESO #05 - Restaurant window > >Ken, I can hear you about the subject. I mean - having heard others :-). > >But can you please explain in a sentence or two - what is it in the >composition (or lack thereof) that does not work for you... I'd rather >learn. > >Boris > > >On 11/27/2015 23:40, Ken Waller wrote: >> Looks to be well exposed, but the subject and composition don't work >> for me. >> >> Kenneth Waller >> http://www.pentaxphotogallery.com/kennethwaller >> >> ----- Original Message ----- From: "Boris Liberman" <[email protected]> >> Subject: Boris PESO #05 - Restaurant window >> >> >>> Please have a look and then your brutal and honest say :-). >>> >>> http://pentax-ways.blogspot.com/2015/11/2015-05-restaurant-window.html >>> >>> Boris -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List [email protected] http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions.
