Ken, I hear you. I must say that, I did not spend too much time on this
shot, although this framing with all its deficiencies that you pointed
out was entirely intentional...
Well. as I often say "we aim to please, sometimes we miss"...
Boris
On 11/28/2015 22:52, Ken Waller wrote:
The closeness of the window ledge to the bottom edge of the image and the
inclusion of the strip (of wood ?) next to the menu on the LH side. Minor
points but gives the feel of a snap as opposed to a crafted, thought out image.
-----Original Message-----
From: Boris Liberman <[email protected]>
Subject: Re: Boris PESO #05 - Restaurant window
Ken, I can hear you about the subject. I mean - having heard others :-).
But can you please explain in a sentence or two - what is it in the
composition (or lack thereof) that does not work for you... I'd rather
learn.
Boris
On 11/27/2015 23:40, Ken Waller wrote:
Looks to be well exposed, but the subject and composition don't work
for me.
Kenneth Waller
http://www.pentaxphotogallery.com/kennethwaller
----- Original Message ----- From: "Boris Liberman" <[email protected]>
Subject: Boris PESO #05 - Restaurant window
Please have a look and then your brutal and honest say :-).
http://pentax-ways.blogspot.com/2015/11/2015-05-restaurant-window.html
Boris
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