There is a detail in the building on the left that reflects the area on the right where the photographer is .. the lightsin the room about halfway down.. The ominousness of the buildings being tilted adds to the brave new worldfeeling of the whole composition. The more Ilook at it the more I like it (Hint: Boris, submit to next PDML annual please)

ann

On 12/9/2015 6:36 PM, Mark C wrote:
Another vote for the original. The building on the left helps frame and balance the image and also adds context. I'd second the comment that the second image might be stronger cropped to vertical with less open space to the left.

On 12/9/2015 1:31 PM, Boris Liberman wrote:
Hi!

As some of you suggested, the building on the left can be left out (minimal pun). So, let me offer you one of the edits, where this advise has been followed to the pixel :-).

http://pentax-ways.blogspot.com/2015/12/2015-07-taking-picture.html

Which one do you prefer? This one or the original here: http://pentax-ways.blogspot.com/2015/12/2015-06-taking-picture.html

Thanks.
Boris




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