On Mon, Jan 24, 2011 at 8:18 AM, Thom Brown <t...@linux.com> wrote: > On 24 January 2011 03:52, Robert Haas <robertmh...@gmail.com> wrote: >> On Sun, Jan 23, 2011 at 9:39 PM, Thom Brown <t...@linux.com> wrote: >>> There are quite a few sentences which I'm not sure how to correct as I >>> don't know how they're supposed to read. But I've put together a >>> patch to correct some of the typos and grammar. There's a lot I >>> haven't yet gone through though. >> >> Thanks. I just committed a bunch of cleanup, including whatever of >> your patch I didn't rewrite along the way. If you want to take >> another crack at it now I'd be most grateful... > > Okay, an additional patch is attached.
Committed with a bit of further hacking. Probably still needs more work - in particular, I think there are probably some bits in here that should use <caution> or <example>, and there's still some awkward phrasing. -- Robert Haas EnterpriseDB: http://www.enterprisedb.com The Enterprise PostgreSQL Company -- Sent via pgsql-committers mailing list (pgsql-committers@postgresql.org) To make changes to your subscription: http://www.postgresql.org/mailpref/pgsql-committers
