I wrote:
> This change is wrong and should be reverted:
>         <para>
> -         Specifies the name of the database to connect to to dump global
> +         Specifies the name of the database to connect to dump global
>           objects and discover what other databases should be dumped. If

> Or maybe we should rewrite the sentence to avoid the repeated "to".

A little while later it came to me that we could write it like this:

        Specifies the name of the database to connect to for dumping global
        objects and discovering what other databases should be dumped.

                        regards, tom lane


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