On Sun, May 17, 2015 at 5:37 PM, Tom Lane <t...@sss.pgh.pa.us> wrote:
> I wrote: > > This change is wrong and should be reverted: > > <para> > > - Specifies the name of the database to connect to to dump global > > + Specifies the name of the database to connect to dump global > > objects and discover what other databases should be dumped. If > > > Or maybe we should rewrite the sentence to avoid the repeated "to". > > A little while later it came to me that we could write it like this: > > Specifies the name of the database to connect to for dumping global > objects and discovering what other databases should be dumped. > That seems better, thanks. Fix applied. -- Magnus Hagander Me: http://www.hagander.net/ Work: http://www.redpill-linpro.com/