On Sun, May 17, 2015 at 5:37 PM, Tom Lane <t...@sss.pgh.pa.us> wrote:

> I wrote:
> > This change is wrong and should be reverted:
> >         <para>
> > -         Specifies the name of the database to connect to to dump global
> > +         Specifies the name of the database to connect to dump global
> >           objects and discover what other databases should be dumped. If
>
> > Or maybe we should rewrite the sentence to avoid the repeated "to".
>
> A little while later it came to me that we could write it like this:
>
>         Specifies the name of the database to connect to for dumping global
>         objects and discovering what other databases should be dumped.
>

That seems better, thanks. Fix applied.

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