> I wrote: >> Actually, that whole para could do with a rewrite; whoever wrote >> it was obviously not familiar with Strunk & White's dictum >> "Omit needless words". > > Looking closer, there were also some unnecessary inconsistencies with > the rest of the section, such as use of "records" rather than "rows", > and different markup choices. I propose the attached ... it's > actually a bit longer than the original, but that's because it > offers more details.
Thanks for looking into this. The patch looks much cleaner than before. Best regards, -- Tatsuo Ishii SRA OSS, Inc. Japan English: http://www.sraoss.co.jp/index_en.php Japanese:http://www.sraoss.co.jp
