On Sun, Dec 8, 2019 at 3:51 AM Tatsuo Ishii <is...@sraoss.co.jp> wrote: > > > I wrote: > >> Actually, that whole para could do with a rewrite; whoever wrote > >> it was obviously not familiar with Strunk & White's dictum > >> "Omit needless words". > > > > Looking closer, there were also some unnecessary inconsistencies with > > the rest of the section, such as use of "records" rather than "rows", > > and different markup choices. I propose the attached ... it's > > actually a bit longer than the original, but that's because it > > offers more details. > > Thanks for looking into this. The patch looks much cleaner than > before.
I agree this is way better!
