Laurenz Albe <laurenz.a...@cybertec.at> writes: > On Wed, 2023-01-25 at 08:22 +0000, PG Doc comments form wrote: >> Maybe this would be better? (I don't know the comma rules) >> "because the files(,?) that are generated/processed by these tools(,?) are >> already included in the tarball"
> +1 > Correct English would be: > These tools are not needed to build from a distribution tarball, because > the files generated by these tools are included in the tarball. The existing wording is not incorrect AFAICS, but I agree it's a bit awkward. I'd modify one word in your version: These tools are not needed to build from a distribution tarball, because the files generated using these tools are included in the tarball. Or possibly "with" instead of "using"? regards, tom lane