On Fri, Jan 25, 2013 at 01:41:06PM -0500, Tom Lane wrote:
> Bruce Momjian <br...@momjian.us> writes:
> > On Fri, Jan 25, 2013 at 12:50:12PM -0500, Tom Lane wrote:
> >> (looks at the whole section) As-is, it's definitely not good, because
> >> before there were three independent examples, and now there are three
> >> and a half --- the added example depends on the variables declared in
> >> the third example.  But using the blank line means you've formatted it
> >> as a stand-alone fourth example, which is not only wrong in itself but
> >> it screws up the meanings of both of the subsequent paragraphs.
> 
> > OK, how is this?  The C comment allows me to add 'or'.
> 
> It's still completely failing to address the problem that it's formatted
> as a fourth, independent example.  Please remove the blank line.

How is this?

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diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/ecpg.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/ecpg.sgml
new file mode 100644
index bf01857..4d904cd
*** a/doc/src/sgml/ecpg.sgml
--- b/doc/src/sgml/ecpg.sgml
*************** const char *passwd = "secret";
*** 198,205 ****
  EXEC SQL END DECLARE SECTION;
   ...
  EXEC SQL CONNECT TO :target USER :user USING :passwd;
! 
! EXEC SQL CONNECT TO :target USER :user/:passwd;
  </programlisting>
     The last form makes use of the variant referred to above as
     character variable reference.  You will see in later sections how C
--- 198,204 ----
  EXEC SQL END DECLARE SECTION;
   ...
  EXEC SQL CONNECT TO :target USER :user USING :passwd;
! /* or EXEC SQL CONNECT TO :target USER :user/:passwd; */
  </programlisting>
     The last form makes use of the variant referred to above as
     character variable reference.  You will see in later sections how C
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