I’ve wanted to let you know that I’ve just saw Dan Ingalls presentation on the Lively Kernel and he also set emphasis in immersive
:) On Apr 29, 2014, at 10:52 PM, Ben Coman <[email protected]> wrote: > > Some feedback on the Pharo 3.0 Release welcome text. > > --- > > From watching the Ruby conference video from another recent thread, use of > the word "immersive" really caught my attention. > As well, from another recent thread, newcomers probably don't care if its > Smalltalk - either actual or inspired. > > So lets sell the strongest outside marketing message first... > > Welcome to Pharo, an immersive live programming environment. > > rather than > > Welcome to Pharo, a clean, innovative, free, and open-source > Smalltalk-inspired environment. > > --- > > Newcomers wont know how to "execute" a statement, so... > You can learn pharo by highlighting the next line and selecting [Do it] from > the context menu: > rather than > You can learn pharo by executing: > (Later reference to "executing" is okay.) > --- > > > Better [ackaging for standard download > Better packaging for standard download > > >Browser the documentation http://www.pharo.org/documentation > Browsing the documentation http://www.pharo.org/documentation > > >Getting the Pharo By Example book (available as a free PDF): > (This is the only line with a colon, remove that.) > > Maybe move "New class builder" under Kernel heading . > Maybe change "More" heading to "Tools" > > cheers -ben > > btw, it would be really cool if URLs within comments were automatically > identified and clickable to launch an external browser. > > >
