Hi nullPointer

here are some feedback on your work that is really important for us.


Use Smalltalk way of formatting code.
==========================

        btn -> button please use normal smalltalk conventions.

        inClassSideBoolean
                ifTrue: [ aClass class compile: aStringCodeSource classified:  
(aSymbolCategoryName asString) notifying: nil. ]
                 ifFalse: [ aClass compile: aStringCodeSource classified:  
(aSymbolCategoryName asString) notifying: nil. ].
or
        inClassSideBoolean
                ifTrue: [ aClass class
                                compile: aStringCodeSource
                                classified: (aSymbolCategoryName asString)
                                notifying: nil. ]
                ifFalse: [ aClass compile: aStringCodeSource
                                classified: (aSymbolCategoryName asString)
                                notifying: nil. ].

        getFiles: aStringPathOfDirectory

        | aFileDirectory fullPathOfFile  aCollection |
        
        aFileDirectory := CLFileDirectory on: aStringPathOfDirectory.
        aCollection := Bag new.

        aFileDirectory fileNames do:
        [
                :nameOfFile |
                
                fullPathOfFile := aFileDirectory fullPathFor: nameOfFile.
                
                aCollection add: fullPathOfFile.
        ].

        ^aCollection.

Don't use space everywhere
is not smalltalk

getFiles: aStringPathOfDirectory

        | aFileDirectory fullPathOfFile  aCollection |  
        aFileDirectory := CLFileDirectory on: aStringPathOfDirectory.
        aCollection := Bag new.
        aFileDirectory fileNames do:
                [:nameOfFile |
                fullPathOfFile := aFileDirectory fullPathFor: nameOfFile.
                aCollection add: fullPathOfFile].
        ^aCollection.

If you give me access I can reformat everything.


Add some comments
==========================
In the examples category there is no class comments so I have no idea  
about what I'm reading.


There is not one single class comment: please add some of them.
So far I could not find how to use it



Do not refer to your class inside itself
==========================
CLCompiler>>createMessageInClass: aClass withCodeSource:  
aStringCodeSource inProtocol: aSymbolCategoryName

        CLCompiler createMessageInClass: aClass withCodeSource:  
aStringCodeSource  inProtocol: aSymbolCategoryName inClassSide: false.
                
->

CLCompiler>>createMessageInClass: aClass withCodeSource:  
aStringCodeSource inProtocol: aSymbolCategoryName

        self createMessageInClass: aClass withCodeSource: aStringCodeSource   
inProtocol: aSymbolCategoryName inClassSide: false.



Nice to see that you use traits :)
=========================

Keep working.
I still believe that a windowSpec based on a literal array is better  
than a byte array.

Stef





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