On Sep 18, 2015 9:04 PM, "Thomas Hruska" <thru...@cubiclesoft.com> wrote: > > On 9/18/2015 8:37 AM, Hannes Magnusson wrote: >> >> Do you have a suggestion on rephrasing? >> >> -Hannes > > > A couple of ideas: > > "Fast, flexible and pragmatic, PHP powers everything from your blog to the most popular websites in the world to powerful command-line utilities." > > The sentence gets a bit wordy and spans multiple lines even at the widest layout. > > > "PHP is a popular general-purpose scripting language for building robust web applications and command-line utilities." > > It's a bit longer than the original sentence but doesn't span multiple lines at the widest layout. > > > Only one sentence should mention the command-line. And the above are just a couple of ideas. If you don't like either one, I can try coming up with something else. By the way, even if you don't like the second idea, just excluding " and command-line utilities" results in a sentence with more "punch" than the original: > > "PHP is a popular general-purpose scripting language for building robust web applications." > > And it's shorter than the original too.
I like this. What do you think, Hannes?
