On 06 February 2004 17:40, Mehdi Achour wrote:

> 
> > 
> @@ -115,8 +115,8 @@
>        <simpara>
>         So far, we have only covered the work of reading element names
>         and their values. SimpleXML can also access element
> attributes. 
> -       Access attributes of an element just as you would elements of
> -       an <type>array</type>.
> +       Access attributes of an element just as you would
> access elements
> +       of an <type>array</type>.
>        </simpara>

Sorry, but this is one where the original was better English.  Although the
additional "access" is not syntactically incorrect, it makes the sentence
read awkwardly and I doubt many native English speakers would include it.

Cheers!

Mike

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